she looked like snow white
and she danced like Rihanna
and she smiled like a child
and she smelled like sugar
she had hair like obsidian
and she kissed like Juliet
and she laughed like a frat boy
and she glowed like the moon
she was soft like a feather
and she spoke like a queen
and she walked like a model
and inside she felt like a sinner
he looked like a drug addict
and he danced like a drunk dad
and he smiled like an idiot
and he smelled like weed
he had hair like fire
and he kissed like Romeo
and he laughed like a chain smoker
and he glowed like the sun
he was hard as a rock
and he spoke like a teenage dirtbag
and he walked like he was the shit
and inside he felt like a nobody
she liked him
and he liked her
and they would've liked each other
if they both didn't feel like shit
I don't know if this was supposed to make me smile, but it did. Not in the "oh how adorable" kinda way, more like the way you smile when the truth hits you and there's really nothing else to say.
ReplyDeleteThe parallelism and the ending. This is insane good. The ending keeps ringing in my head.
ReplyDeleteI love this. And I'm loving all your stuff.
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